You Before Me

*YOU BEFORE ME*

It’s you before me with every inch of my skin
With every step I take, I think how’ll you make
Make me cling to your arms without a second gone
Entwining to the fear of being caged in your thoughts, I think of you before me, once again
What a nuisance it would’ve been, oh how I am keen
If only you’d think of me before you the way I do
Loving can hurt but don’t forget till you realize, it can turn you down into ashes of flammable dust
You’ll be fighting to survive but now it’s doom after lust
It’ll rip you apart as you lose the grip
No more able to grasp the rope and trip
Who’ll console you as your soul retreats
Who’ll rebuild the bridges you burnt
Hun, it’s hard to stay calm, in this world of unfinished mysteries
But remember when I’m gone, I always lived for you, fighting with the monsters with friendly faces
Handling nostalgic cases with the thought of YOU BEFORE ME, it’ll always be YOU BEFORE ME

by
Esha Mehroze

29 thoughts on “You Before Me

  • September 26, 2016 at 8:50 am
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    It’s a Beautiful self impression by a beautiful minded person with heart touching words with the honesty and purity of heart love it and regards for your feeling

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  • September 26, 2016 at 9:15 am
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    خوبصورت خیال اور پختہ اسلوب۔ جیتی رہئیے، آباد رہئیے۔

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  • September 26, 2016 at 9:21 am
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    This is so beautifully written!!

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  • September 26, 2016 at 9:58 am
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    The best thing I’ve ever read on Internet so far.

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  • September 26, 2016 at 10:24 am
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    Way to go Esha, keep writing.

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  • September 26, 2016 at 10:46 am
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    Really appreciative!proud of you girl.. stay blessed

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  • September 26, 2016 at 11:20 am
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    Beautiful words. Well done Eisha

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  • September 26, 2016 at 11:22 am
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    Beautiful words well done Eisha

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  • September 26, 2016 at 12:20 pm
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    Beautiful expression
    Masha Allah…sooo well written
    #Impressive
    Way to go Eisha…
    Plz do keep wrotingand keep usposted of your new creations =)
    Bless you!

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  • September 26, 2016 at 2:05 pm
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    Thank you for writing such a beautiful poem ,it’s the endless beganning
    we will wait to have more from you little angle. Stay Blessed and shinning. You are the twinkling sparking star

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  • September 26, 2016 at 2:29 pm
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    Love it … Good work …

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  • September 26, 2016 at 2:33 pm
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    This is undeniably the most beautiful, touching, meaningful and comprehensive piece of poetry a person may compose that I have read so far which not only reflects the wisdom but also shows the sensitive-cum-delicate-cum-versatile personality and thoughts of the poetess/author. May God bless you, Esha, with every happiness and prosperity in both worlds, Amen!

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  • September 26, 2016 at 3:32 pm
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    How deep and beautiful..my little eishu is such a gem…love u

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  • September 26, 2016 at 3:40 pm
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    Lovely poem…really liked it and you’ve done a very good job Esha..so very proud of you..keep it up! 🙂

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  • September 26, 2016 at 4:14 pm
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    Sweet expression of words. Keep up the good work.

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  • September 26, 2016 at 5:10 pm
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    Wow!! As pretty as the writer herself!! Keep up the good work ??

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  • September 26, 2016 at 5:20 pm
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    True feelings in simplest form, beautiful!

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  • September 26, 2016 at 5:26 pm
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    Very nicely composed , way to go . Keep Writing

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  • September 26, 2016 at 7:12 pm
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    I am astonished & surprised.. words have taken me far away off… brilliant !!!

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  • September 27, 2016 at 10:11 am
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    On the point??
    Good job

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  • September 27, 2016 at 1:39 pm
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    this brilliant piece of writing gave me goosebumps! very impressive

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  • September 27, 2016 at 3:30 pm
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    Beautiful piece of poetry……..m surprised at this very young age you have such a mature writing expression……

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  • September 27, 2016 at 9:26 pm
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    I’m very impressed on your creative ideas and thoughts, that anyone can indulge into it..keep working hard on your beautiful poems…Im so proud of you!! Luv u eishu..

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  • September 28, 2016 at 1:29 am
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    Commendable!!! Really Proud of you Eisha… Masha Allah… Keep It Up And Waiting For Ur Next One…

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  • September 28, 2016 at 5:12 pm
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    An extremely beautiful poem!

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  • October 3, 2016 at 8:41 pm
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    @chaikhanah.pk I’m extremely overwhelmed to be given this tremendous opportunity to express my views on such a topnotch blogspot.I’m utterly grateful,it’s more than I could’ve ever asked for.Your recognition means a lot!
    Thank you so much everyone for your ultimate support.Your extensively generous compliments have already taken me to the seventh sky and I’m on top of the world,really.Need your support to keep going,always.

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